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burnsy
24-11-2008, 09:45 PM
ok here is my 1st attempt at making a sig:


http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1510/sideburnsspecialist2zl8.png (http://imageshack.us) http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/6061/sidespecialstavy1ba7.png (http://imageshack.us)


comment are welcome, let me know what u think :D

EDIT: i have now added a matching avatar, tell me what u think of that to :D

Mavric
24-11-2008, 09:51 PM
hmmm... i like it, very simple.


your main text seems a bit sloppy tho (at least to me) ... try changing the detail to crisp, or strong, ect.

idk if you like what i do or not... but mabye try to blend your render into your background a bit as well, lower the opacity, or take an eraser (opacity down), and blend the edges....




very very good first attempt tho =)

Feva
24-11-2008, 10:05 PM
As Mav stated..
Very Very good first attempt..

I would be proud to be able to make something like that :D

awesome work bro! ;)

OmG
24-11-2008, 10:08 PM
As Mav stated..
Very Very good first attempt..

I would be proud to be able to make something like that :D

awesome work bro! ;)

Yeah. You are right.

tclem2362
24-11-2008, 11:45 PM
Nice Work bud. Ill give this one a 5 star =)

Feva
25-11-2008, 12:23 AM
rather than the border on the avatar..
i think it would be better if you had a full /complete border..

so it was all dark.. didn't have an inner border..

I hope you understand.. don't know graphical terms :P

*use different border.. on EDGE* :D

ozio
25-11-2008, 07:32 AM
If it wasn't your 1st i'd say it's avarage.

sprbean
25-11-2008, 01:13 PM
Nice one, It's simple but good ^^.

Lizi
25-11-2008, 03:25 PM
Nice work :)

Judobreaker
25-11-2008, 03:49 PM
Looks pretty nice.
I suggest you work a bit more on the background as it's a little plain colored and not really lively at the moment.
Also if you can, try and play with some lighting.

Keep it up. ;)

Astro
25-11-2008, 04:51 PM
Pretty cool bro !

RanitaRene
25-11-2008, 05:11 PM
I have to say is one of the best "1st attpemps" i ve seen mate... keep working ;)

burnsy
25-11-2008, 10:38 PM
Looks pretty nice.
I suggest you work a bit more on the background as it's a little plain colored and not really lively at the moment.
Also if you can, try and play with some lighting.

Keep it up. ;)

hmm ok. thanks for the tips mate :D

MissDeadly
26-11-2008, 12:31 AM
For a first try that really is good :D keep on practising :P

onyxonyx
26-11-2008, 01:50 AM
haha i dont think this sig is ur first try ^^
awesome sig bro,welldone.

Hayley
26-11-2008, 02:00 AM
very nice sig

burnsy
26-11-2008, 02:44 AM
haha i dont think this sig is ur first try ^^
awesome sig bro,welldone.

hahaha it is my 1st :P

Shock3X
06-12-2008, 02:43 AM
unbelievable first try! great! :thumbsup:

Jennie
06-12-2008, 02:55 AM
Looks good burn.. the christmas one you made for me i like also xD I added it to my signatures 3rd one ever made for me, thank you again and good luck with your progress hun.

burnsy
06-12-2008, 03:15 AM
thanks everyone :D